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Any avid English A1 people?

Would anyone like to read through my World Literature Essay before I hand it in, probably for good...

I just want to know if there is anything drastically wrong with it, or any huge improvements that you think I should make?

Its also 1551 words long :eek:

and any suggestions on silly bits that I could cut out would be very much appreciated.

Thanks!

Reply 1

Deus

I STRONGLY suggest you remove the attached file ASAP.

Please ask people to PM you and you can PM it to them, but do not make it publicly available.

Reply 2

HMSChocolate

I STRONGLY suggest you remove the attached file ASAP.

Please ask people to PM you and you can PM it to them, but do not make it publicly available.

VERY good point.

Try Elsa, Charlie.

Reply 3

nota bene

I've removed the file since it is not suitable to put it up publically when it is something you're going to hand in. I'm sure there are people on here who are willing to read it, but please PM them the essay, for your own safety :smile:

Reply 4

~Lc~

HMSchocolate

Try Elsa, Charlie.

not that I want to do any extra work :laugh:

seriously Charlie I thought u were aiming for a 45! does a 45 aiming student publicly display their Internal assessment?

Reply 5

HMSChocolate

does a 45 aiming student publicly display their Internal assessment?

We all have stupid moments.

Maths-crazy minimod

Well the downoad count was already 8 or something when I saw it so you've better hope those people aren't plagarisers.

Elsa

not that I want to do any extra work

Just suggesting. you don't have to do it. :biggrin:

Reply 6

FutureEconomist

I was gonna ask about the PM thing, but I was in a bit of a hurry, thanks for removing it though ^_^ silly me...

You'd have to be desperate to copy THAT though!!!

Anyways... Lc you're back :O I knew you couldn't resist it!

Stupid Request/Question #2: Who is Elsa? :biggrin:

Reply 7

~Lc~

no I'm back for a day or so to figure out how the hell I'm going to travel to loughborough (if u have suggestions check help me in my thread in travel)

and dude HMS just quoted MY! post and put "Elsa" instead of "~Lc~" who do you think Elsa is?

;dry;

Reply 8

FutureEconomist

Yeah, haha...oops....I'll PM you it now ^_^ oh wait, I can't its on my USB, tomorrow... :biggrin:

pm me if you want.

charliebarlow

You'd have to be desperate to copy THAT though!!!

Clearly you haven't met many other IB students :tongue:

. Desperation is the one thing that links us all together. You would be surprised at the number of people that have to write an IA a few days before the final deadline :biggrin:

Reply 11

FutureEconomist