And they will also disqualify the other candidate. You can't prove who copied who, that's why you shouldn't share it unless you really trust the other person. Especially not to other people who are writing their own personal statements.
dont share it to people you dont know - instead show as many friends as you can, as many teacher as you can, any other adults (aunts/uncles/parents/cousins - anybody!) get as many opinions as you can from people you know but dont risk somebody copying it by sharing it online