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jolo2811

j'ai l'intention de rester en contact avec mes amis à l'avenir et je voudrais les rencontrer chaque semaine avec eux.

Reply 1

Vanny17

Original post by jolo2811

j'ai l'intention de rester en contact avec mes amis à l'avenir et je voudrais les rencontrer chaque semaine avec eux.

It's okay. Just try to separate your sentences. Try using commas and full stops to convey what you are trying to say, or it makes it difficult to decipher.

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Reply 2

jolo2811

Original post by Vanny17

It's okay. Just try to separate your sentences. Try using commas and full stops to convey what you are trying to say, or it makes it difficult to decipher.

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thanks a bunch!

Reply 3

pseudonymegg

j'ai l'intention de rester en contact avec mes amis à l'avenir et je voudrais les rencontrer chaque semaine.

(you don't need to use "avec eux", you've already shown that with the pronoun "les")