Help to review personal statement for postgraduate studies in International Relations

Hi there,
There might already be a topic on the subject, but I can't seem to find it. So, I am wondering if some of you could help me to improve my personal statement. I am applying for a MA entitled "Conflict, Development and Security" at King's College. Firstly, if you have any relevant information on this master, I'd be glad to hear it. Then, I am going to post my personal statement in the next message, if you have the time to review it!
There are a few things to know beforehand; I tried to stick to 1000 words max, as it was written in a method on internet. Overall, the guideline isn't the same as for undergraduate studies.

If you have enough information, feel free to comment on anything,

Cheers,

Laura

P.S. Spellcheck it before submission. Sounds obvious but it's easy to get over-enthusiastic when you finally think you have it about right, and forget the basics.

Thanks Klix88, I was not going to post it actually, I realised my mistake after posting this message. I followed your instructions so thank you. However, I would really like to obtain the review of one of you guys for my PS, because I finished it and need to complete my application as soon as possible. The problem is that I can't complete my submission on the review page, there seems to be a bug of some sort. Could I send it to you personnally, or to someone else?

Thank you,

Laura