Not sure what I lost marks on

Hey,

I just completed an essay on Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde, and I am not sure what I lost my marks on as I got 23/30 (AQA btw), if anyone has any constructive feedback, it would help me immensely as my mocks are in a few weeks!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pUYymHZt41cQauL2Re_sw48ii5ETkI8bhgDXj-S6nNI/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks!

Jian

Hey,

I just completed an essay on Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde, and I am not sure what I lost my marks on as I got 23/30 (AQA btw), if anyone has any constructive feedback, it would help me immensely as my mocks are in a few weeks!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pUYymHZt41cQauL2Re_sw48ii5ETkI8bhgDXj-S6nNI/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks!

Jian

Isn't it the role of your teacher to point out where/why you lost marks, and to suggest areas for improvement?