Struggling

Hi, I'm really struggling with English Lit at the moment. I starter Year 12 with an A and now I'm getting a C/B. Can someone please give me advice????

Hi, I think I'm struggling with essays the most. I think I've written a really good one and I get like a Band 3.

Do you think that is based of knowledge or structure? I'm getting A* in English Literature so if you wanted you could send me a photo of a snippet of your essay so I could see what you could work on?
What are books are you studying in English and what exam boards?

Omg yes please, that would really help! I'm studying Gatsby, Othello, Handmaids, Feminine Gospels, and Streetcar, with AQA.

Woah! We are doing REALLY similar subjects. I'm doing AQA: Gatsby, Othello, Feminin Gospels, Handmaids and Top Girls, so that one play is the only difference.
This will be easier for me to help now cuz i know the books <3

Literally so glad you replied fr. I did a Gatsby essay over Christmas that I haven't had marked or anything. I could send that one?

yeah of course!

Sorry, I'm new to this. How do I add photos?

by bold and italics theres an insert image button

it says add a url but i’m dumb and don’t know how to do this

when you right click a photo you should be able to copy image address or something along those lines and i think that works

Its really long, you do not have to read it all. Thank you

Hey, I'm really soryy but it isn't allowing me to open it, is there a way you could send put it on onedrive and share it through a link? Sorry again

Its really long, you do not have to read it all. Thank you

Does this work instead????

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Or this?????

Hi, I'm really struggling with English Lit at the moment. I starter Year 12 with an A and now I'm getting a C/B. Can someone please give me advice????