What do you think of my poem? (Late Night Edition!)

My tears were meant for you... Flowers, summer
Hours lost, the soul that sprouts... On this dustless
Hour, reminiscent of myrrh, there are some
Voyages I will never talk about.

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Reply 1

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Original post by Kaizoh22

My tears were meant for you... Flowers, summer
Hours lost, the soul that sprouts... On this dustless
Hour, reminiscent of myrrh, there are some
Voyages I will never talk about.

Damnnn short but sweet. What was the intention of the poem. Any specific message behind it because not bad at all!!

Nice

Original post by tbi_zlx

Damnnn short but sweet. What was the intention of the poem. Any specific message behind it because not bad at all!!

I was trying to imitate Baudelaire, It's weird I don't think of a message when I write, ! haha

Reply 4

AestheticStudying

Original post by Kaizoh22

My tears were meant for you... Flowers, summer
Hours lost, the soul that sprouts... On this dustless
Hour, reminiscent of myrrh, there are some
Voyages I will never talk about.

wow, that was beautiful!