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Hi every one I need to write a story that describe a boy who live his mum and got a gcse test in couple of weeks. He makes mum worry that he’s not doing good revision. But in a week he start revising and he got confidence in his test.
Need show mum anger , his feelings on the exam’s night and exam environment. Also need a twist at conclusion that shows happy or surprising ending!!!!!!
I really struggle in describing and using idioms.
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Hi,
It seems that you've got the plot. Do you have to use idioms in your story?

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Hi,
It seems that you've got the plot. Do you have to use idioms in your story?

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Thanks darling!!! What tone do you want the story to put across?
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Thanks darling!!! What tone do you want the story to put across?
(Original post by summerberry19)
Hi,
It seems that you've got the plot. Do you have to use idioms in your story?

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Hi,
not really sure but what ever that make it more interesting and engage the reader mind , would be desire.
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Thanks darling!!! What tone do you want the story to put across?
Hi,
it need to be light hearted comic , not tragedy ones.
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Hi,
it need to be light hearted comic , not tragedy ones.
Okay. Could you maybe expand on the plot (but still just a skeleton of said plot).
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Thanks darling!!! What tone do you want the story to put across?
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Okay. Could you maybe expand on the plot (but still just a skeleton of said plot).
I’m attaching the plot I got but it’s just an idea and can anything happen in the story.
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I’m attaching the plot I got but it’s just an idea and can anything happen in the story.
thanks I’ll read it as soon as possible!!!
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thanks I’ll read it as soon as possible!!!
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Thanks
It’s no problem at all.
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