Masters Degree Personal Statement Assistance Please

Hi everyone,

I am due to graduate next year with a 2:1 or first-class biomedical science degree, and I am looking to pursue a master's in Immunology. My postgraduate supervisor suggested I go to forums to see if anyone could offer insight and advice on personal statements.

Can anyone from universities or alumni provide information about what they wrote on their personal statement and would be happy to give feedback on my personal statement?

Dont submit your personal statement to anyone
Student room has an official submission area
https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/forms.php?do=form&fid=25

Thankyou so much for sending me the link and telling me they have an official submission area. Is there any chance you know anything about the process of how "The student room" reviews the personal statement?