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Original post by l_rai10
what would be a good structure in order to achieve an a* for the question Germ theory has the biggest impact on the development of medicine in Britain” assess the validity of this view for the years 1850-1950. ?


Hi! The way I structured mine was by finding 3-4 main topics and writing a 2-3 paragraphs for each topic.
You can start with the main topic idea summarised in a sentence, then you can expand on the ideas in smaller paragraphs. Make sure to write a 'mini conclusion' at the end of each section to wrap up that idea.
I don't know which exam board you are doing, but check with your teacher if there are any things you definitely need to include. For example, I had to closely analyse an interpretation of a historian. Maybe create a plan of your structure and confirm it with your teacher, so you can tweak any minor issues.
Hope this helps :smile:

Reply 2

Original post by l_rai10
what would be a good structure in order to achieve an a* for the question Germ theory has the biggest impact on the development of medicine in Britain” assess the validity of this view for the years 1850-1950. ?

Hi, which exam board are you with? And what's the word count for the coursework?
Original post by Pandasarecute65
Hi! The way I structured mine was by finding 3-4 main topics and writing a 2-3 paragraphs for each topic.
You can start with the main topic idea summarised in a sentence, then you can expand on the ideas in smaller paragraphs. Make sure to write a 'mini conclusion' at the end of each section to wrap up that idea.
I don't know which exam board you are doing, but check with your teacher if there are any things you definitely need to include. For example, I had to closely analyse an interpretation of a historian. Maybe create a plan of your structure and confirm it with your teacher, so you can tweak any minor issues.
Hope this helps :smile:

I totally agree with this advice and would just add that sometimes mind-mapping your main topics can be really helpful, both in terms of branching out what paragraphs you'll include for each, and also how they'll best fit together overall.