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Is my poetry any good? Please help

Neither of these are finished and where written in under 3 minutes so i know they may not be good.

*A fool*

A do gooder in this world
is a fool
for to think of others
would make one an idiot
in a land so cruel

I wish i had
a heart made of stone
society falling to pieces
individuals willing to ch*a t , backstab and k* ll
in a ploy for the throne

There’s no one to trust
the ones who appear
to have good intentions
unveiled as the most corrupt


*The maze*

The maze
Life it is a maze
you may wander through
it’s twists and turns
hidden from our view

Be certain
you select the right path
but when stagnant
do not presume it is the end
as it may be
just the start

As we waltz through
this bittersweet game
the ticking timer of life
chimes relentlessly as we wonder
if it is all in vain

How long the maze
will have us in it’s grasp
we do not know
seemingly never ending
pleasures and pains
upon us it bestows

Come rain or shine
We are all locked within it’s gates
The certainty of morbidity
Our only possible escape

Happiness it is ever so elusive
We search between us
For a love
That we yearn to be exclusive
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