Hi! So I have written an email regarding work experience and I'm asking for some feedback on it. Is this okay? How can I improve it? Is this too much? Please let me know x
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hello. My name is Sophia D*** and I am a Year 10 student currently attending ***********. I would like to enquire about a potential work experience placement at ******* which I would be available to carry out for one week, from 2nd July to 7th July.
Currently, I am working towards my GCSEs. I am especially interested in maths, specifically finance which is the reason why I am interested in undertaking work experience with you. I believe I am a dedicated hard-worker and I am keen to learn more about the finance industry, therefore, I am certain that this organisation can help me expand my knowledge, gain valuable skills and experiences that would help me in the future.
I would be extremely grateful to be given this incredible opportunity. Please find attached my CV. If you have any questions or inquired please feel free to email me or call me at 07*******
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sophia D***
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