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How to describe it?

I have a desire to write a short story, but I am somewhat stuck, could anyone help me out?

How do I explain the time in written form?

"It was nearing eleven o'clock" that may sound fine to some, but it does not indicate whether it is day or night.
I think you can get away with describing the context of the day before describing the time
e.g.
The lingering shadows of the dreary night painted an omenous evening. I stared up at the clock. It was seconds away from 11.

or
I stared at my watch wondering how long it was until lunch. It slowly creeping towards 11 o'clock.
Original post by MindMax2000
I think you can get away with describing the context of the day before describing the time
e.g.
The lingering shadows of the dreary night painted an omenous evening. I stared up at the clock. It was seconds away from 11.

or
I stared at my watch wondering how long it was until lunch. It slowly creeping towards 11 o'clock.

Thank you, very interesting.
slowly the time changed

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