1st para. of my ps...overwhelmingly CRAP...

LS.

I can see what you mean... but the paragraph just doesn't 'relate' to medicine. A kid bandaging up teddy bears? It doesn't really show the 'caring for others' or other aspects important to a doc. But thats just my opinion.

[hihihihi hope your pharmacy ps is going better than mine :frown:

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Actually, the teddy was banged from head to toe. Suggestive of an abusive doctor :tongue:

j/k Minnie!

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Actually, the teddy was banged from head to toe. Suggestive of an abusive doctor :tongue:

j/k Minnie!

First time I've laughed today

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Minnieb48

bloody fantastic!! bailey your wonderful...i knew it was grammatically crap but i still liked my idea..it just didnt sound right....but know you've made it perfect...god..i'm sorry for being crazy but i'm sending that!!!!

Best of luck, and please get plenty of people's ideas before you decide for sure it's a good idea to start off like that. First impressions do count.

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LS.

I can see what you mean... but the paragraph just doesn't 'relate' to medicine. A kid bandaging up teddy bears? It doesn't really show the 'caring for others' or other aspects important to a doc. But thats just my opinion.

[hihihihi hope your pharmacy ps is going better than mine :frown:

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look...i dont know if you have super abilites to be able to write all the important aspects of med in a 5 lined paragraph...but i dont..so...you're going to have to read on for that....

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Minnieb48

look...i dont know if you have super abilites to be able to write all the important aspects of med in a 5 lined paragraph...but i dont..so...you're going to have to read on for that....

Would your teachers or headmaster be willing to offer help? My headmaster went through mine with a fine toothcomb to make sure it was up to scratch.

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thanks a lot for everything bailey...and yeah..i won't be rash...or will i????
argghh!!...i won't but thanks a bunch!! :biggrin:

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Minnieb48

thanks a lot for everything bailey...and yeah..i won't be rash...or will i????
argghh!!...i won't but thanks a bunch!! :biggrin:

Always glad to help :biggrin:

Good luck!

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erm...everyone liked the rest of my ps..i left the beginning blank...so..-shrug-

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