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Moon set

Have you ever seen the moon set?
Dwight bright light ever shines
No one has seen it set, I bet.
A light so pure that binds -
Humans to allure of love.

Rhapsody , oven silken touch ,
Ever lasting - shines miles above .
Her enchanted glimmer helps much,
Where everyone beloves .

Comes all peace with her vision,
Even blurry light, surpasses all pain .
Comes with it a pleasure undone,
To hold it around and all gain .

Have you ever seen the moon set?
For it always keeps there,
To help I bet!
From where it sees a thousand lovers, gain and come apart.

Have you ever seen the moon set?

Moon set

Have you ever seen the moon set?
Dwight bright light ever shines
No one has seen it set, I bet.
A light so pure that binds -
Humans to allure of love.

Rhapsody , oven silken touch ,
Ever lasting - shines miles above .
Her enchanted glimmer helps much,
Where everyone beloves .

Comes all peace with her vision,
Even blurry light, surpasses all pain .
Comes with it a pleasure undone,
To hold it around and all gain .

Have you ever seen the moon set?
For it always keeps there,
To help I bet!
From where it sees a thousand lovers, gain and come apart.

Have you ever seen the moon set?